Sunday, 22 February 2015

Script V1 (before editors notes)

Script
(untitled)
Not in script format as Blogger can't interpret.

C1=Character1
C2=Character2
C3=Character3

SA=supporting actors


Act 1

Scene 1
(Wide Shot, Panning left to right)
Landscape view of Leeds, combined with CGI Buildings and possibly flying cars. Location and year in bottom corner.

Transition to by black building blocking camera shot into next scene

Scene 2
(wide shot, close up on each character as they speak)
Characters in scene Character 1 (C1) and supporting actor 1 (SA1)

The set is a table with both characters on each side. The room has dark grey walls with lights from above.

C1 :
Character is standing, hands on table.

“You drug baron, who is he? Just give me his name!”


SA1 :
”Never”
Sitting in the back of the chair, relaxed.

C1
gives a heavy sigh of disappointment.  

 “You give me no choice”

C1 lifts a strange square box with a button connected to it.

SA1
“This can’t be the…”
 Sits forward in his chair

C1
“Oh yes, the only prototype left!”
He smirks after knowing he’s won.

SA1
(hesitantly)
“you… you are something else”

 Looks away to the floor and slowly back at C1
: “His name is…”

Scene ends.

Scene 3
As scene 2 ends C1 walks into a new room. The room is very modern office style Nothing else to add.
Character in scene Character 1(C1) and Character 2 (C2)

C1
“ (Character 3’s name here) he’s the one running the show, no need to thank me”

acts like he’s on top of the world.

C2
“Thank you detective (C1) you are dismissed”
C1
Looks very confused “ I’m sorry, (witty comment here)

C2
 “Detective, … After what you did…”

Flash Back to C1 and SA1 walking away from a building which blows up behind them.
C1
”Yeah, which was awesome”


C2
:” what you did was against the rules”
C1
 “Pfft, rules are just guidelines”
C2
” You blew up the building on purpose”
C1
”WHAAAAAAAAAAT …” sarcastic tone “ no I would never”

C2 looks unimpressed
C1
 “You can’t say that wasn’t ‘awesome’”
(higher pitch on awesome)

C2
 ”hmm well detective, since your methods are too… awesome I’m afraid the other detective will be jealous and have to suspend you”

C1
 “but sir with all due respect I got a suspect and got a name”

C2
“And may I ask did you convince him to talk”
C1
 “erm… well you know because I’m awesome”

C2
“Detective”

C1
 “ Muffin button…”

C2
 “you are off the case, now leave”

C1 walks away out of the office.

SA2 (support actor female) standing outside the office

SA2
 “Too bad you won’t be able to finish the case due to suspension, and I ‘really’ hope it doesn’t take too long!”

C1
 “Funny, but I ‘really’ hope it doesn’t take too long! is the name of your sex tape”

Walks off the scene to the right
End of Act 1


Act 2

Flat of C1

scene 1

Montage of the actor bored in different positions throughout the scene.

Scene 2
Incoming call from the chief (C2)

C1 slicks back hair and prepares for the call

C1
”Hey, how you doing? Because I’m just having the time of my life, not bored at all.”
 Pause
“ Got it no problem sir I’ll be on my way”

Phone call ends
C1 dances then knocks over object to stop.

End of Act 2



Act 3

Night Time Location outside the Rose bowl,  C1 comes in with black combat gear or normal gear.  The chief C2 is observing the assault on the building

C1
”No need to panic, because I’m here, (C1’s name)”
enters heroic pose
C2
”yes I’m glad your here”
Turns to C1

C1
”exactly… wait what!”

C2
 “ at this moment in time all of the moves we’ve made are ineffective, therefore need all the help we can get… Even Dave is here”

Camera blur to Dave sitting like a small child, with a happy meal and pulls out a toy.

Cuts back to C1 shocked in awe

C1
”I want one”
C2
“NO”
C1
”WHYYYY!”
C2
”because I’m your commanding officer!”

C1 sticks out tounge

SA2 (female) enters and says


SA2
”everything is ready for the second assault
C2
”good lets get everyone to speed
SA2 and C2 leave
SA3 enters (officer)
SA3
”sir your weapon is ready”
Passes Nerf gun spray painted black
Camera runs from the base of the barrel along the shaft then up to C1
C1
”Lock and load” (needs something better here!)

Over Com : “All units prepare for Assault”

bottom hand of screen “1 hour and 37 mins “ camera looking at the Rose bowl build

Cuts to C1 and Dave wide shot looking unhappy

C1
 “Why has nothing happened yet… I mean we’re just sitting here doing nothing at all… You agree with me don’t you Dave?”

Dave
 “peew peew”
Fake gun sounds

C1
“I’m out”
C1 walks around the rose bowl to the the entrance to the underground car park.

He walk down to the under ground car park from here the car cuts to a lift CGI it opens and C3 (really got to name these guys) walks out

C1
“Freeze, NYPD! (C3’s name)”

C3 raises hands

C3
 “ What the.. wait NYPD New York Police
C1 lowers gun

C1
“No it’s the New Yorkshire Police Department”

C3
“doesn’t quiet work does it”

C1
“I know… I tell them that”

C3
“Best do” begins to walk off again

C1
“Okay thank for feedback… and where do you think your going?”

C3
“Oh please ”

C1
“(C3’s name), I will defeat you”
C3
“39”
C1
”Huh?
C3
“Sorry please continue with your monolog, my plane isn’t here for another (Looks at watch) 2 hours, so please continue”

C1
“I, (C1’s name) will bring you to justice”
C3
“27”
C1
“seriously what are you doing!”

C3
 “32 and it’s the amount of times I’ve heard the cliché lines from ‘heroes’”

C1
“Well… “

C3
“this will be good”
Thinking really hard for C1

C3
“Don’t think too hard dear…”

C1
“Fuck you!”(change this as inappropriate)

C3
“Ha 73”

C1
“ right, I’m handcuffing your ass”

C3
“oh…”

Pauses to think

“2”

C1
“Annoyed grunt”

C3
“this is where this game ends…”

shoots a blast from his staff

C1
dodges
 “Ha missed, try again for a…”
interrupted by blast


C1
“Now that’s rude”

C3
“I’m sorry I didn’t realise”

C1
“It’s okay I know it’s diff…”
Another blast

“Seriously…”


C3
“Sorry my hearing must be off because I hear kill me please”

C1
”that’s it I’m fighting now”

C3
“Thank god”

Fight begins Storyboard this stuff

After shooting him a bit

C1
“Man you need glasses”

c3 doesn’t care

C1
“ Er I stopped dodging, you know”

C3
“Exactly”

C1 turns around to find they are homing blasts

C1
 “Oh… Ohhh… Clever DIC….”
Blast hits


Near end

C1 down on the ground and C3 standing tall

C3
“well this was fun, nice playing with you ‘hero’”

C1
slowly begins to get up

C3
“Oh darling, stay down”

   C1
“how’s about no”
c3 looks bit stunned as it wasn’t a cliché line
           
C1
“It’s time to break you”


C3
(in head George tekai “Oh My…”)

C1
“Like a kitkat bar”

C3
Shocked
“Er that’s a new one”

C1
“Eat my load”
           
C3
George Takei Oh My
“not now George”

hits C3 who then becomes lying on the floor in pain
C1 walks up to him

C1
“Time to take you out of the oven”
           
C3
in pain
“Huh?”

C1
“Because your done”
           
Chief enters to this


C2
“well done detective”

C1 pulls a smirk

After 1st set of credits
camera on C1
   C1
“Oh it’s been a while”

Cuts to the muffin button machine
Pushes button
VFX to make a Muffin appear.

Rest of the credits follow.





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